This is my story that I have been writing during silent writing time. I chose this story because I have been doing this story for quite a long time. I hope you enjoy my story. Please note, there might be a couple of mistakes as it is a draft copy.
#The life of a unicorn
By gracie.A
In 2017 there was a unicorn born called sparkles. 22 YEARS LATER. Sparkles was now 22 she had a job she was a doctor but we have to get to the story now so here we go. 7.30am Sparkles got up and had a shower and then ate her rainbow candy corn cereal and then went and brushed her beautiful white clean teeth and then got her unicorn brush to brush her beautiful rainbow mane then she went and got changed into her doctors uniform.
She put on her makeup put on her shoes got her nice rainbow handbag and got in the car and went to work . 3.00pm she had her lunch it was a fairy bread sandwich and a sprinkle cookie and a slice of rainbow cake then she went back to work she fixed some patients up and then is was then hopped into bed and read her book about monarch butterflies. 8.30pm. Sparkles was very tired from a busy day's work so she went to sleep.
9.00am Sparkles woke up and went and had a shower then had her breakfast and went see her friend because it was THE WEEKEND sparkles loves the weekend she got in her car and went to see her friend called Crystal they were going to go to the beach because it was a sunny day. That's why Sparkles was had her bathing suit underneath her clothes she had her beach bag in the back seat of her car inside there was her sunscreen, sunglasses,sunhat and her beach towel
On the way she stopped at the two dollar shop and bought a deflated beach ball and a pump so her and Crystal could play with it at the beach. 2 MINUTES LATER Sparkles was at the beach with Crystal playing with the beach ball in the water but then Crystal threw the beach ball too far and it got stranded out in the sea Crystal said sorry too Sparkles and sparkles said “it`s ok it was only two dollars” So they went and put on some sun screen they lay out their towels and sun bathed it was getting late so Sparkles and Crystal packed up and went back to Sparkles house crystal stayed the night they watched a movie called the minions 2 and they also had a midnight feast with lollies and chips and had some dinner which was fish and chips with tomato sauce But then they got very tired so they went to bed. 10.00am They got up and had a shower then Crystal went home. The end .
Did you like my story? What did you like about it ?
Did you like my story? What did you like about it ?
This sounds like a great story. My favourite part was when Crystal and Sparkles decided to go to the bench. This story really shows alot of your creativity and imagination, I can't wait to see more of your blog posts. Next time make sure to proof read your story properly. It will be great if you post soon.
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