Welcome back to my week 8 blog post about my poem.
During our writing workshops we have been working on poems and what different types of poems there are and how they are different to each other. I decided to make a haiku about myself.
Down below is two of the paragraphs that are in poem. The numbers beside it are the number of syllables in that sentence because we have also been learning about syllables in our writing workshops.
Grace A is my name -5
I like to play sport it's fun -7
I am year 7 -5
I like to have fun -5
My favorite colour is Orange -7
I like gymnastics- 5
I chose to write about myself because its something I know the most about and I want people to know about me and see who I am. I was going to do a limerick but it was very hard to find words that would rhyme together.
Thanks for reading my blog post about my poem that I recently did in my workshop and I hope to see you in my next blog post. Bye!
What type of poems have you heard of before?
Kia ora Grace, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an excellent job on your poem! You managed to include so many awesome facts about yourself, while still following the rules of a haiku so great job!
You mentioned in your poem that you like to have fun. What kinds of things do you do to have fun?
I enjoy playing my ukulele, going to the beach, and baking lots of goodies!
There are a couple of lines in your Haiku where the amount of syllables you have don’t quite match the amount of syllables you needed in that line. I always find it helpful to clap out words to find out how many syllables they have.
Perhaps this could be something you could try the next time you create a Haiku?
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