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Friday, April 17, 2020

Writing task - biography editing !

Welcome back to my blog post for this week .

This week I will be sharing with you my writing task for this week.
This week for our writing task we had to get a couple paragraphs for our biography that we did in term 1 - for my biography I chose Helen Clark.  Then we had to look at a google drawing that had a bunch of different language and we had to of had a couple of them in biography. Then we highlighted the parts in the paragraphs that we thought we used that language and then we would write a comment beside it and explain why we think we used that in that paragraph and why we think its important for everyone to use it. Down below is the link to my writing task just press on the link.

Writing task

Thanks for reading my blog post for this week and I hope to see you in my next blog post. Bye !

What language do you think is important to be used in a biography ?

2 comments:

  1. Hi Grace
    Nice work Grace you have obviously done your research on Helen Clark. I did not know she had written 6 books. how would you like to be a politician?

    Steve

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  2. Hi Grace,
    You have included some good facts Grace. I can't believe it has been 12 years since Helen Clarke was Prime Minister or that she is 70 years old!
    Do you think Jacinda Ardern is doing a good job as our current Prime Minister? Would you like to be in her shoes?
    I look forward to reading your next blog.
    Mrs Ferguson

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